Wednesday, 31 October 2018

Plot more than telling a Good Yarn.



Reality often seems to have no rhyme or reason in fiction you can shape it, giving events patterns and meaning.



Classic Story Structure


Classic Story structure includes the beginning, the middle and an end.

Beginning

The beginning is where you introduce the audience to the setting, characters and the situation. It often ends with a something catchy to draw the reader in. A dramatic turning point, upsetting the routine everyday things (status quo) and sets the story in motion. The beginning of the crisis/dilemma or problem forces the characters to grow, changing direction and take action.

Middle

This is the longest part of the story.Characters pass through a series of events, complications or obstacles that increase the intensity. This causes tension to rise and fall building toward the BIG climax.

Climax happens after a dark point for the protagonist, pulling them self to triumph and employing what they have learnt, or it could be a downfall when they are feeling at the highest point.

The goal the hero is trying to reach could be irrelevant, and they may find the real goal is beyond what they first thought. E.g. The student may want to get past the bully and arrive at school. The ultimate goal could be to achieve at school but this isn't happening when you can't get to school safely. This realisation is the  mid point of the story not the moment of climax, a shift in direct creating more tension.

End

The end is a short section the pulls all the pieces after the climax to together, tying up lose ends.

Character Arcs

This is for more able writers, as they begin to show how a character grows through the story both emotionally and possibly physically (Grows from being 5 to 7 years of age). This change is called the character arc.

In the beginning of the story the character doesn't know things about himself. The character may think they are not strong, through events the character may realise to be strong doesn't mean you have to have muscles. The first turning point shakes up their beliefs helping the story and character to change course.

The middle of the story is the learning and growing section of the story for the character building to the climax. Where the character uses what they know and have learnt.

By the end the character has grown and changed their is a new equilibrium, way or the character could be defeated and completely disillusioned.

Of course the characters path should not be easy, they need to struggle toward the goal as each new challenge raises the stakes.

Wednesday, 3 October 2018

Painting Alley Fence 2 - Art Alley

Phase one 

Started last year when we designed murals for four of the panels and column pictures for the individual boards on the wooden fence. This took a long time as the group wanted detailed pictures.

Phase two

We also did in 2017 undercoating the fence so we had a white platform to paint onto so our murals were the colours we wanted.

Phase three: 

We started this year painting the panels so we could display what we as an art group liked, favourite foods, places, patterns, labels, games, and even family. Unfortunately we then had a mishap with the fence and we had to redo some areas.

Phase Four: 

We wore our cool new uniforms to school but got changed into an old set of clothes, some of us brought our old uniform. No way did we want paint on our new uniforms.


Krystal Leigh  - My fingers ended up blue, and I seemed to have more paint on me that on the fence. Strangely my teacher wasn't too happy. But I had fun. When we added the dark blue around paint splashed it started to look much better.

Demetrius P - I thought it was cool painting the poles red, but we had to be careful not to get it on people or what they were painting and that was not easy.


Amelia - I was painting the background for the hibiscus flower in green. It was cool to see the flower take shape even through we weren't painting the flower yet. We took our time to make sure the paint was in the right place, the boys seemed to be in a hurry.


Steven - I enjoyed spending the whole day painting and not working. I painted the poles red there seemed to be a lot of them and we still have 3 more to do. It was even better when Auntie Jess came and helped us.

Shawn - Painting the fence was fun as we didn't have to do school work. When Auntie Jess helped us she thought it would be funny to paint her hand yellow and add it to my shirt. The worst part was when we painted and the drips went in the wrong place.

Painting the Alleyway Fence

Our Community is Home Project.

 Whanākitanga wanted to brighten up the Alleyway to Lelani Ave.


We have been waiting for Sunny Thursday Mornings to brighten up the Alleyway Fence. We have designed a series of murals for the corrugated iron fence and for the wooden panel fence we designed individual panels to represent a range of children and what is important in their lives.

For the wooden fence we thought about what makes us unique, our families, cultural and likes. We looked at our favourite food, games, books, places, clothes, patterns that represent our culture and or family. We experimented with different colours to best represent our images and backgrounds for them to stand out on.

For the iron fence we thought about images that represent the various cultures in our school. Our new logo, our school values, myths and legends. This side of the fence doesn't see a lot of sun in the mornings so hopefully we will get some sunny days so we can paint our murals in the afternoon.